Saturday, January 28, 2012

Riotous poetry


London in July. Night, Hot - like sweaty. Sirens in the air, Blue lights abound.

I’m on a late, patrolling, my Day-glow jacket, like a beacon, crowd controlling.

Radio buzzing like a wasp or two. Helmet shining. Handcuffs dangling. Goldfish visor gleaming.

A shop, popped open riotously, burns. Acrid smoke invades my visor, my nose.

A hoodied, bloodied, muddy, yoof, yawning, steals a Sony, the only screen for him.

He turns and runs. The chase begins. “Stop!” I shout but he is fit, nimble and swift

My lunchtime Big Mac (and large fries), breaks my wind, brakes me, makes me sick.

A copper can’t hurry when he’s stuffed with McFlurry, slugged by nuggets, choked by large Coke,

So, breathless, I lean against a rust-red railing and think, ’Am I on overtime?’

Monday, January 23, 2012

Harry, Charles and Joan

One - Harry

In his front garden, Harry Baker smiled. His roses were a profusion of colour and perfume, a more than adequate reward for the hours he had allotted to their care. He inhaled with delight as he walked along the path towards his home.

A small, pale, forty-two year-old man, he had delicate hands, a round tummy and thick, black eyebrows. His suit was a reasonable fit but its seat was mirrored by sedentary friction. His brogues gleamed. His umbrella, tightly furled, dangled on his left arm. In his right hand his briefcase contained only an empty sandwich wrapper. He took the case to work every day because of its rich brown leather, rugged stitching and brass combination locks. It was an expensive way to carry a sandwich but Joan had given him the case on their first married Christmas.

The umbrella was superfluous on this bright June evening but Harry’s occupation demanded certain standards. They were a small price to pay for a regular income, a useful occupation and a fulfilling married life. He toiled in the offices of a large insurance company. His mortality calculations formed the basis of contracts between his employers and people who wanted to transform their inevitable death into good news for their family. He knew, statistically, about death.

He came home each day on the Metropolitan Line tired but looking forward to an evening with his wife. He had never understood why Joan was willing to spend her life with him. She was an inch or so taller than him, a year or two older. Her mouth was large and usually smiling. Her figure was trim, her makeup perfect and her eyebrows punctiliously tweezered. Her hair sometimes suffered from an surfeit of hairspray but was, in all other ways, tonsorial perfection. Harry considered himself lucky to have met, wooed and married her.

At the front door his left hand vanished into his jacket pocket and emerged clutching a key-ring with two keys and a transparent plastic block containing a tiny model of St Paul’s Cathedral. The smaller of the keys unlocked his office desk so he used the larger to open the door.

‘I’m home, darling,’ he cried in an affectionate sing-song tone.

He closed the door with a brogue, dropped his briefcase on the parquet and the umbrella into the hallstand. A flight of stairs grew out of the hallway, his staircase to marital delight. ‘Soon,’ he thought and headed for her daytime empire, the kitchen.

It was almost new with white cupboard doors and thick wooden worktops. It was warm and held not Joan but a hint of her perfume. There were two circular sinks, a ceramic hob and glass-fronted oven. A large window looked out on Harry’s roses.

‘Where are you?’ he sang, ‘You’re not in the kitchen. Where are you hiding? I’m coming; ready or not.’

He opened the fridge and found the lemonade. He collected glasses from a wall cupboard and partially filled them. A glass in each hand, he set off for their living room.

‘Drinky, darling,’ he said, ‘I bet you’re thirsty.’

Harry was used to Joan’s games. It had started on their first wedding anniversary.

She’d made a spectacular dinner: Beef Wellington with scalloped potatoes, green beans, sugar snap peas and a Caesar side-salad. He’d bought a bottle of Sainsbury’s champagne but they’d drunk the Chateau La Mondotte Saint-Emilion she’d somehow found. It was divine. The evening was a great success until she asked him to do the washing up. He was quite merry at the time but she insisted, reinforcing the order with a wink, raised eyebrows and a seductive glance upwards. By the time he’d finished she was in bed, fast asleep.

Her engaging coquettishness wasn’t limited to the dining room. In the bedroom she was active, demanding and innovative. Her closet contained interesting clothing and selected items from the Ann Summers catalogue. Her inventiveness was lightened by her smile and gentle insistence. They seldom slept early but always slept well.

Harry’s living room was about fifteen feet square with an unlit wood-burning stove, presently unlit, in an Inglenook fireplace. The south wall held large patio doors giving out on to some decking and Harry’s garden. The doors had Roman blinds in a dotted pattern matching the fabric on the three piece suite. The sofa was angled to face a flat-screen TV. The blinds were down.

Harry put the glasses on coasters on the coffee-table and hit the switch. Nine ceiling-mounted LEDs flooded the room with light. No Joan.

He pushed the button on the remote. The blinds hummed up making a blue pelmet at the top of the doors. Beneath them, through the double-gazing, he could see the privet hedges that bordered the garden, the two sun loungers, his kettle barbecue and the neatly mown lawn.

He killed the LEDs and sat in his favourite armchair.

‘Come on, Joan,’ he said, ‘It’s a lovely evening. I thought we could have a barby.’

He could not prevent a wisp of annoyance in his voice. She was a wonderful woman in every possible way, he reflected, but her tendency to go just that bit too far was sometimes a challenge.

He shouted ‘Joan! Come on. Let’s stop mucking about and have something to eat.’

Then he saw the note stuck in the iron band at the base of the chimney.

She had pencilled it on a piece of paper torn out of a reporter’s spiral notebook. Twelve words that drove him back on to the chair, unable to breathe, stunned:

“I can’t stand it any more. I’m leaving. It was fun. Joan.”

He read and reread the note, as if trying to divine a hidden meaning. At last, he groaned, crumpled the note into a pocket and drank some lemonade. He staggered into the hall, grabbed the telephone and called his brother.

Two - Charles

Charles Baker was three years older than Harry and lived around the corner. Harry had been surprised when Charles, fitter, taller and richer than Harry, announced his intention to move closer to “tighten family ties” but Joan had reminded him that, as the artist Jane Howard said, “Call it a clan, call it a network, call it a tribe, call it a family: Whatever you call it, whoever you are, you need one.” When Harry told him this, Charles growled through his neatly trimmed moustache, ‘Bloody artists, Idiots. Spongers. Shoot ‘em all, I say.’

Harry knew irony when he saw it.

Charles’s new garden backed on to Harry’s and their relationship was lubricated by the Screwdrivers they shared across the hedge. Charles made a mean Screwdriver with ice-cold orange juice and Beefeater 24 gin. Not much orange, of course.

A writer by trade, Charles had had a number of novels published with one, “Death Cairn,” made into a reasonably successful Hollywood movie. He specialized in science fiction thrillers wherein the central character embarked on violent crusades of bloody retribution, pausing only to spread his genetic code. Charles claimed to be a realist and told Harry that a Hollywood movie’s success was proportional to its body count and the exposed area of its leading actress’s flesh.

Soon Charles was Harry’s and Joan’s regular supper guest. Joan remarked on this development a number of times and treated Charles not as one of her clan but, rather, a visiting celebrity. She wasn’t fond of celebrities; Harry was usually able to soothe the occasional friction between his two favourite people. He enjoyed the competition they displayed for his support. He always, eventually, sided with Joan and laughed off Charles’s rage. Such disagreements, often noisy, never came to blows.

Harry’s knuckles were white on the telephone handset.

‘She’s left me,’ he said.

‘Harry?’ Charles didn’t seem surprised and his beautifully modulated, glutinous voice was calm.

She’s gone.’


‘Of course! There’s a note. I don’t know what to do.’

‘You’d better come over.’

Harry dropped the phone and made for the door, collecting St Paul’s Cathedral on the way.

Five minutes later he was sitting in one of his brother’s four leather armchairs sipping a Screwdriver.

The room couldn’t be more different from Harry’s. Oak panelling, brass candelabras, a modern open fire, a log basket. A faint aroma of warm circuit boards came from the loudspeakers and TV screens all over: on the walls, on pedestals, on towers, under the furniture, on the ceiling. Harry never understood why Charles should want to sit in the middle of an orchestra. Surely the auditorium would be better. When he had mentioned this, Charles pressed a button and his living room instantly transformed itself acoustically into the Albert Hall. Less crowded, of course.

Harry had been mildly amused when Charles demonstrated his home security, bringing High Definition images of the surrounding area to the screens. It was as if the house had suddenly vanished and they were standing outdoors. Charles obviously liked to keep an eye on things. When Harry had jokingly described the system as Megaparanoia, Charles smirked, ‘I’m watching you, sonny.’

Tonight, they were thoughtful as the Brandenburg Concerto enveloped them, Charles examining the crumpled note. They sipped their Screwdrivers, excellent despite having been made in haste.

Charles said, ‘This is her handwriting?’

Harry said, ‘Of course! Well, it must be. I’m not sure. For God’s sake, Charles. It was in the Inglenook!’

Charles said, ‘All right. I’m just trying to help here.’ He sipped his drink, ‘Was there a row?’

‘No. Nothing like that. When I got home she wasn’t there.’

‘Women are strange and unpredictable creatures.’

Charles’s experience of the fairer sex was a mystery. Joan had once told Harry that she suspected Charles was gay, what with all the bloke toys and the moustache. Harry disagreed, confiding that Charles once, it was rumoured, had an unhappy affair at the height of which the object of his affection had run off with the “”Death Cairn” director. Charles had written a book about it: “Death Direction,’ but sales were disappointing. Joan was unconvinced.

‘What are you going to do?’

‘I don’t know. I don’t know where she is, why she left, what happened. I’m entirely in the dark about my marriage. My God, Charles, that’s fifteen years down the drain.’ Harry was close to tears.

Charles said ‘Has she got a mother?’

‘A mother? She died when Joan was a child.’

‘In extremis, women always go back to mother. It’s genetic. Has she got any money?’

‘We have a joint account with Barclays and she has a housekeeping account with the Post Office.’

‘Not a problem.’ He stroked his moustache, ‘Right! What you need is my Seven Step Plan for the Innocent Victim. You are innocent, aren’t you?’


‘Okay. Step one: Call the office. Tell them you’ve got a virus but will be in tomorrow.’


‘Step Two: Call your doctor. Make an appointment. When you get there, appear glum. Feign depression. Weep. Talk about stress. Get a note for a least a week.’

‘I am stressed!’

‘Even better. Go for a fortnight, then. Send the note to your office. Enclose a tear-stained note.’

‘I can do that.’

Good. Step Three: Call Barclays. Open a new account in your name and transfer all the money to it. To survive you’ll need money. It’s your money, after all. Step Four: call a locksmith and change the locks. She might come back.’

‘Charles -’

‘Step Five: Make a big pile of all her possessions, clothes, frying pans, make-up, tights, toiletries etcetera on the front lawn.’

‘But -’

‘Step Six: Go out for dinner. Choose a restaurant that she wouldn’t like. Harvester, maybe. Keep your eyes open for unattached women. You never know.’

‘I couldn’t -’

Step Seven: Sleep the sleep of the innocent wronged.’ He took a significant pull on his Screwdriver, ‘Would you like me to write all that down?’

‘No. I think I’ve got it.’

Charles insisted though, booting up his desktop computer and making an Excel spreadsheet which he printed on his laser printer. Harry noticed that the heading, “Seven Step Plan,” like the plan itself, was bold. Charles extracted a promise that Harry would start the Plan first thing in the morning. Harry finished his drink, thanked his brother for everything and wandered home to his empty bedroom.

Three - Joan

Charles strolled into his own kitchen. It was entirely unlike Harry’s. It had screens, stainless steel surfaces, switches and dials, twinkling LEDs, a walk-in freezer of dazzling aluminium, seven feet tall, six feet wide and an electronic combination lock on its door.

Charles added his and Harry’s Screwdriver glasses to the neatly racked crockery in the dishwasher and, with nimble fingers, hit a pattern of twelve digits on the freezer door panel. Deep inside, electric motors whirred and tumblers shifted. The door opened. Bright freezer light, cold air and an unusual smell filled the room.

With the freezer door open’, Charles could look into Joan’s eyes. She stared, sightless, eyes wide, through the clear polythene he’d wrapped her head in before parking it on the fourth shelf. A rip in the polythene explained the smell, a combination of hairspray, perfume and blood.

Friday, January 20, 2012

Tough outlook for the Major

I do a bit of computer training; just for fun really. There’s a bunch of elderly people in the village who love to look at a screen, adore the Internet and email each other with links to interesting stuff. I’ve been doing it for about four years now and we seem to get on. I get out and bask in their undisguised admiration. They find out how to get their shopping delivered. They also make a contribution to the local church. We meet there for coffee, world right-putting and curriculum planning from time to time. Everybody’s happy.

Then one day a new bloke turns up. He’s quite a loud retired Major from the Education Corps or similar. We buy him coffee. When he finds out about our IT interest he tells us that he’s got a computer running XP, Outlook Express and Word 2000. He says it’s absolutely ideal for him. I point out that it’s twelve years out of date and he says it doesn’t matter. I say, ‘If it works for you,’ ‘It does!” he says.

He enjoys writing to local newspapers about stuff that annoys him and his letters often get published. We read them. The old blokes congratulate him and sometimes agree with him.

One day he says that I should provide computer training for his wife. ‘She needs to know how to get to all the family information if anything happens to me,’ he says and tells me about his backup routines which involve USB drives. I say, ‘Sure, but I can’t really talk about XP or Outlook Express or Word 2000 because they’re all obsolete and I don’t have them installed. He says that that’s okay. I should deal with general principles. This goes on for about a year.

And then a week or so ago he sends me an email and mentions his wife again. I say, ‘Okay. Let’s make a date.’ I notice his ISP is the Post Office, his email address is something like and his email footer invites me to have a free computer scan for VIRUSES and click on a link to buy a Spambuster program.

I ask him why he uses it and he says that he’s happy with it and that an email address doesn’t need to be memorable. He adds that he and his wife have the same email address because 1: We only need the one, 2: We have no secrets from each other, 3: She doesn’t need one and 4: “She doesn’t have the skills.” It turns out that there is only the one shared account on his computer. He says that’s all they need.

Anyway, she comes round one afternoon. She’s a slight attractive lady with a quiet manner. We muck about with Windows for a couple of hours. She’s keen to learn but clearly hasn’t spent a long time with a mouse in her hand. I set her up a Gmail account which, amazingly, happens to be her: ! Result, I think. Then things go weird.

The Major sends me an email and asks me what her Gmail address is. I am instantly confused. Hasn’t she told him? Has she forgotten it? Is there something going on? Can I not tell a bloke his wife’s email address? Who cares anyway? I think for a day and then send him her address. I explain my dilemma.

A couple of hours later I get another email from him – using his wife’s Gmail account! He says he doesn’t like it and it’s not half as easy as Outlook Express. He attaches a photo of his wife.

I reply expressing surprise that he’s using her account. I list Gmail’s advantages over OE. He returns my email with my reasons annotated in green and red. He doesn’t agree.

I tell him that I won’t be working with his wife again. He knows best. He’s a teacher. Teach her!

One of the old blokes tells me that if Major is the rank someone retires with it means they were rubbish. Funny thing is that I read the same thing only the other week in Lee Child’s book ‘The Affair.’ He should know, I guess.

Friday, January 13, 2012

Hello Vodafone - it's Friday 13th!

The Chief Executive


Vodafone House,

The Connection,


Berkshire RG14 2FN

Friday, 13 January 2012

Dear Sir


If you care to examine my customer records you will find that I have called your Helpline an amazing number of times over the past few weeks in a doomed effort to persuade the SureSignal you sold me to work. The SureSignal will provide me with a strong cellphone signal in my home, apparently, as I’m sure you know. There is no cellphone signal where I live, despite my house being 900 feet above sea level and almost the highest point for about twenty miles.

Each time I call I inform you of my cellphone number (both via keypad and voice,) my PIN, the first line of my address and my date of birth two or three times. I have spoken to your Helpline, your Technical Support Department and your Escalated Technical Support Department. I have had your Technicians remotely accessing my computer and my router. They have modified lots of settings. Each call, some of which have lasted more than two hours, ends when your Technician tells me that all is well, I have no more worries and the SureSignal will be working well in 24 hours.

Sadly, events have not emancipated their claims. It still doesn’t work.

I am moved to write to you, sir, because the other day I struggled through to your Technical Department, politely explained the problem for the umpteenth time and the Technician hung up. Fortunately you “record these calls, to improve your service,” so you can check my assertions with ease.

There are insufficient words in English to describe the rage that overcame me.

Nonetheless I calmed and rang again, eventually speaking to a person named Lena in your Technical Department. I asked her how to reset the SureSignal. She was really helpful with a terrific telephone manner. She said that I should:

  • · Press the reset button until all the lights flash
  • · Let go of the button when they flash
  • · Unplog the power and the internet connection
  • · Plug the power and the internet connection back in.
  • · Within six hours it'll be working

I carefully checked these instructions and, as usual was politely told that all is well, I should have no more worries and the SureSignal would be working well in 6 hours.

I followed her instructions to the letter. 24 hours later the SureSignal wosn’t working. I did it again with the same result. And again, It still didn’t and doesn’t now work.

I have tried and failed to to make it work. I wonder if you, as Chief Executive, have been told that:

  • · SureSignals don’t work
  • · Your Technical Department hangs up on callers
  • · You have an excellent, if misinformed, staffer in Lena.
  • · I am the unhappiest customer you have ever had.

You may feel that, in my case, Vodafone has fallen down in the maintenance of its usual high standards. If so, you may want to help me to get my SureSignal working. I would welcome any such feelings and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Jeremy G Barnes

Thursday, January 12, 2012

Letter to the Editor

The Editor

Haslemere Herald

Dear Sir

The other day I was excited to receive a beautifully wrapped Jiffy bag through my letterbox. It had been mailed from the States and bore the correct postage and a perfectly addressed and printed label.

I opened it in the kitchen. You can, I’m sure, understand my surprise when I drew from it a tin of Spam. As it happens, I quite like Spam, or Spiced Ham, especially in fritters with chips. peas and tomato ketchup. I already had a couple of tins in my larder, just in case.

I am writing to you because I am sure that this unusual event is the beginning of a new surface mail problem. The Internet’s habit of sending UCE (Unsolicited Commercial Email) or Spam to the world’s inboxes has now spread. It’s a worrying trend. Something must be done!

I dropped my unwanted Spam straight into my wheelie bin. My recycle bin was clearly inappropriate.

Yours sincerely

Jeremy G Barnes

Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Vacuum filling itself

Hello Hoover, I won't waste your winsome wiles, your wonderful ways

The children have charmingly chucked chocolate chunks round the room.

They think they can thwart my threats to thrash them, that I am theatrical.

I’ll say I’m sorry.

I'll plug you in, power you up and push you to the appropriate position

And you, with lungs like luminous lagoons, will lull the living room into lovely litterlessness

You can breathe in bits of broken books, dessicated dollies, hacked Action Men, mashed Meccano, Limp Lego.

It's so gory!

You'll bring order to them all. Your electric inhalation is my eclectic exculpation

Move over Hoover! Let's suck some stuff, Afterwards I'll squeeze your bag. It's the least I can do.

Room clear, kids clean, tea eaten, curtains drawn, fire flaming. then TV

We'll cuddle the kids on the sofa, so far so good. And, wide-eyed, we’ll gaze.

It's Jackanory!

Monday, January 9, 2012

The wife - the VIPER

In the nineteenth year of our marriage, the anniversary of which is, coincidentally, today, the wife has revised her health and fitness regime. I have never known her to believe that she was anything but grotesquely obese. She is not, never has been and doubtless never will be. She is fit, shapely and perfectly proportioned. Had I a boat, she would float it.

She is, however, unable to believe the truth. She owns enough herbal remedies, vitamins and assorted unproven remedies to open her own branch of Holland and Barrett. If ever we fall on hard(er) times we could hold a sale which would square the mortgage. She thinks it’s better to keep them, just in case.

For the past nineteen years she has been locked in a daily battle with the image she sees in the mrror. The image is bent by her distorted perception which interprets “tasty” as “hideous.” It’s a battle she can never win.

She’s tried the Atkins Diet, The Low Fat Diet, the cabbage Soup Diet, the Fresh Air Diet, the Gluten – Free Diet, the Boiled Water and a Kipper Diet, all to no avail. She’s eaten Healthily, Sensibly and No Carbohydrately. Recently she‘s taken to eating Annoyingly. I swear it’s the Next Big Thing: The Annoying Diet. She won’t eat what I eat. Too easy. So no bread, no cheese, no beer, no steak, no chocolate. We sit down for supper. I’m lucky if I get a piece of boiled fish with spinach. I have to hide he Toblerone. Such is the fate of the long-married man.

And now to celebrate nineteen years of married bliss would you please welcome the latest weapon in ther War on Waist. The VIPER. The Very Irritating Physical Exercise Regime. She’s up at six running around like people with iPods. Inspired by our (obviously younger) kids she’s signed up for a ten kay. I guess the idea is that she’s so knackered she doesn’t worry about her weght. It might work.

Tuesday, January 3, 2012

What? Hoovering?

(Reuters) - The government unveiled a 250 million pound industry-financed plan to promote good eating on Sunday under which millions of people will receive vouchers offering discounts on healthy foods. The coalition government is promoting the scheme as part of its Change4Life programme…

Meanwhile, in an expensive Whitehall Office:

Top Civil Servant: People are just too bloody fat, sir

Health Secretary Andrew Lansley : Fbviously. They should just bloody well eat less.

TCS: The food industry might have something to say about that, sir.

Lansley: Right. Rewind, then. What can we do? There’s no money.

TCS: Of course not, sir. Your usual response is to let the private sector carry the can.

Lansley: Is it? Good idea. We could launch an initiative.

TCS: Labour did enough initiative launching to see us into the 22nd century, sir. What we need is an industry-financed plan. They’re bound to agree once they understand the alternative.

Lansley: Eating less?

TCS: Precisely, sir.

Lansley: I’m sorry to rain on your parade, but I’ve spotted the fatal flaw in this otherwise briliant, scheme.

TCS: And that is, sir?

Lansley: The supermarkets haven’t got any money either.

TCS: I see where you’re going with this, sir. There’s two kinds of supermarkets. There’s those that work, make a bundle and don’t need any government help. Tesco is a case in point. The other kind never makes money. They’re gagging for customers because they don’t have any. Think of ASDA. Patting your bottom? They’re American. Hence the fat bum image. Everyone hates Americans so they won’t shop there, sir. ASDA’ll chip in a few bucks so people think they care too. You may have noticed, Americans are fat.

Lansley: I see what you mean. They get free government advertising and we get points for caring. Mind you, it’s an intriguing irony. Fat Americans paying to get Britons to lose weight.

TCS: Indeed, sir.

Lansley: One thing. We’re the government, not nutritionists. I’m not sure that we should be telling people what to eat.

TCS: If we don’t, who will?

Lansley: Nutritionists? They know what they’re talking about, don’t they?

TCS: Haha.

Lansley: Okay. Their mums, then.

TCS: Haha.

Lansley: It’s the thin edge of the slippery slope. They’ll be wanting us to tell them how to do the washing up. Make beds. Hoover.

TCS: Yes sir. Shall I get on to that?

Lansley: Immediately.